So here is what I need to know: How does my bio sound? Too much info? Not enough? Spelling errors (God forbid)? Bore you out of your mind? Should I use this black and white image (assuming Leslie gives me permission) or the one I currently have, or a different one all together? Any advice is helpful!
© Photo by Leslie McDaniel
I am a commercial and fine art photographer who recently leapt in faith of following her dreams in Seattle. I grew up in Northwest Montana surrounded by family and friends who encouraged my creativity and passion of the arts. As a recent graduate of the Film and Photography Program at Montana State University in Bozeman, I am on a quest driven by obsession and…well, employment.
My dream is to travel to different countries, learn to cook the local favorites and photograph everything along my journeys. Culture fascinates me. I am always looking for opportunities to increase my knowledge – reading books, entering art shows, meeting other artists, and experimenting with various photographic techniques and skills.
Inquiries? Musings? Advice? I look forward to hearing from you.
I like most of the bio. However, in my opinion, the first sentence needs help. I get what you are saying, but the phrasing is just a little awkward.
ReplyDeleteI love the black and white picture of you!
I'm going to think about it for a few days and try to get back to you...but on that first sentence, maybe try "...who recently took a leap of faith by following..." I agree it does sound awkward the way it's written.
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ReplyDeletePapa Myer said you were looking for writing advise. It is an assumption on my part that this blog is for your business, so that is my thought process in my advise. People love to know about other people, no matter how mundane things about your life might seem to you, to other people its new and maybe even a little exciting. If I were looking to hire a photographer I would want to know why I can trust this person with my memories.
For your bio, I would include thing like what inspires you, why you became a photographer, why photography is your medium of choice, Why you enjoy photographing wedding and because of your own recent nuptials you understand with great clarity the vast importance of these photos..
I hope that helps vs. making your task a bigger challenge. I'd be more than happy to help polish your next draft!
Hope Seattle treats you well!
~Jill
Thanks Jill! I'll be updating the bio hopefully soon, keep track of my blog, I update pretty regular-ly. :)
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